One of two

[S I L E N T S T E P]

Name: Wolf
Age: 4 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: Rogue
Rank: Kit
Physical:

Wolf is a black cat. He has brown eyes and a white spot on his nose. He is very small like his sister. His fur is fuzzy like a little kitten but it is not very thik. He has more scars than his sister since he is a little more rough. He has one on his hind leg witch is pretty big when a two leg kit picked him up and threw him. He also has one on his neck when he was playing to rough with his sister and she didn't want to play and she gave him a good nip.

Personality:

He is a loud kit. He dosn't listen to athority he listens to himself. He think's he can take on anyone and will do what ever it takes to protect his sister. He likes the clans and thinks they are smart for sticking together. He hates when cats are mean to his sister. He suprisingly loves water and playing in mud. He also hates cats who treat him like hes a kit because he dosn't like being a kit.

Friends & Family:

His sister is his only family, her name is Tiny

Characteristics:

Picture:

(he is the black one)

History:

He was born to a rouge just ouside of BreezeClan Terretory. He had one other sibling who unfortunatly died mysteriously. They lived with their mother for a few moons but then she passed away. So now they are running around stealing pray that the warriors burried while they are out hunting. That pretty much leads up to today since he is still a kit.

Roleplay Sample:

Unneeded

Other:

Form completion: Yes

[Fallingmoon]

Your apearence has to have 49 more words and/or one more sentence. If you could, ad more description and lets the words flow together. Now with the personality can you add more to the sentences, describe them. Also, you don't have to, but I would like it if you could say his whole personality. Like what he likes to do, what he doesn't like to do, what sets him off, what Clan he likes the best besides his own, how he comments on other clans, you get it right? In the history can you write your sentences a little better? Describe them? like how did ther other sibling die, how did mommy go to heaven? Where was he born, in the grasses or near the brook in BreezeClan? You know what I mean.

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Great! Well, watch out for the killer Midnight!

Accepted!